I Called Him Temptation: Day 13

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Magenta Harris is a young, black woman looking for a date. At this point, anyone will do. Magenta’s boyfriend, Donellius, hasn’t taken her out on a date in months, and she’s tired of waiting. Magenta’s left feeling depressed and useless after trying to fit her desires into their relationship. Enter Tino, the one who may be the answer Magenta’s been looking for. Tino is bold, dominant, and kinda crazy, but he offers Magenta one thing—a date.

Magenta has to make a choice. Will Magenta and Donellius improve their relationship, or will she risk everything for a date with his polar opposite?


“No, no, I would never want you to feel that way. You’re beautiful, you’re not a piece of crap. Hey, how bout this? We can go on a date right now. Wherever you want.”

I run my hands over the black and pink puff on my head, shaking my head. The tears have turned into ugly crying. All this time I’ve been talking about one little date, and he’s acting like its news! I know where it would go after that. Fucking, then I would go home. It wouldn’t just be a romantic date and nothing more. He tries to hug me, but I push him away. I hide my face in my hands.

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