I Called Him Temptation: Day 15

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Magenta Harris is a young, black woman looking for a date. At this point, anyone will do. Magenta’s boyfriend, Donellius, hasn’t taken her out on a date in months, and she’s tired of waiting. Magenta’s left feeling depressed and useless after trying to fit her desires into their relationship. Enter Tino, the one who may be the answer Magenta’s been looking for. Tino is bold, dominant, and kinda crazy, but he offers Magenta one thing—a date.

Magenta has to make a choice. Will Magenta and Donellius improve their relationship, or will she risk everything for a date with his polar opposite?


“Are you going back to your boyfriend? He said he misses you.”

“Do you have to keep bringing him up? I just wanna go home. Bye.” I get up to leave. He follows me.

I glance at Tino’s hand wrapping around mine. They’re big and always sticky, but I can’t take my eyes off the dirty fingernails. I make a face imagining all the infections I could get. Then again, I’ve let them get on my face, no telling where else I’d let those fingers go. I shudder and step back from him.

“You can stay here,” I say, “because you’re only making me feel worse.”

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